Learning Objectives
     Learning Objectives
    To describe the key features of a piece of 
    To describe the key features of a piece of 
        descriptive writing.
        descriptive writing.
  To apply our understanding to our own descriptive 
  To apply our understanding to our own descriptive 
           writing.
           writing.
  To evaluate our descriptive writing so far based on 
  To evaluate our descriptive writing so far based on 
        clear success criteria
        clear success criteria
        Choose one of the 
        Choose one of the 
        worksheets
        worksheets
        Challenge                    Extra Challenge                   Mega Challenge
        Challenge                     Extra Challenge                  Mega Challenge
        Challenge Worksheet                                                                   Ways you could start your sentences:
        Not sure how to start? Use this to help you:                                          -ly words: Amazingly, Surprisingly, Shockingly, etc.
        I would soon be inside. Amazingly, I could already smell the 
        wonderful, delicious and powerful smells coming from the                              -ing words: Considering, Thinking, During, etc.
        sweets. …                                                                             Connectives: Furthermore, On the other hand, 
        Paragraph One: Explain what it was like waiting outside the                           Meanwhile, etc.
        shop.
        Paragraph Two: Explain how you felt and what you saw,                                 WOW words you could use:
        heard, smelt, tasted and felt.
        Paragraph Three: What did you do when you were in the                                 delicious delightful wonderful amazing spectacular 
        shop? Describe it.                                                                    multi-coloured sweet   mouth-watering sensational 
                                                                                              beautiful stunning shining enormous giant massive 
         Punctuation Reminder                                                                 breath-taking
         Remember: Full stops, capital letters, commas, speech marks, semi-colons, 
         colons, etc.
      Challenge Worksheet                                                                   Ways you could start your sentences:
      Not sure how to start? Use this to help you:                                          -ly words: Amazingly, Surprisingly, Shockingly, etc.
      I would soon be inside. Amazingly, I could already smell the 
      wonderful, delicious and powerful smells coming from the                              -ing words: Considering, Thinking, During, etc.
      sweets. …                                                                             Connectives: Furthermore, On the other hand, 
      Paragraph One: Explain what it was like waiting outside the                           Meanwhile, etc.
      shop.
      Paragraph Two: Explain how you felt and what you saw,                                 WOW words you could use:
      heard, smelt, tasted and felt.
      Paragraph Three: What did you do when you were in the                                 delicious delightful wonderful amazing spectacular 
      shop? Describe it.                                                                    multi-coloured sweet   mouth-watering sensational 
                                                                                            beautiful stunning shining enormous giant massive 
       Punctuation Reminder                                                                 breath-taking
       Remember: Full stops, capital letters, commas, speech marks, semi-colons, 
       colons, etc.
     Extra Challenge Worksheet                                                             Ways you could start your sentences:
     Not sure how to start? Use this to help you:                                          -ly words: Amazingly, Surprisingly, Shockingly, etc.
     I would soon be inside. Amazingly, I could already smell the wonderful,               -ing words: Considering, Thinking, During, etc.
     delicious and powerful smells coming from the sweets. …
                                                                                           Connectives: Furthermore, On the other hand, Meanwhile, etc.
     Paragraphing Suggestion
                                                                                           WOW words you could use:
     Remember, you don’t have to organise you paragraphs like this, this is just to help you 
     if you are stuck.                                                                     delicious delightful wonderful amazing spectacular multi-
     Paragraph One: Explain what it was like waiting outside the shop.                     coloured sweet           mouth-watering sensational beautiful 
                                                                                           stunning shining enormous giant massive breath-taking
     Paragraph Two: Explain how you felt and what you saw, heard, smelt, tasted and felt
                                                                                           Punctuation Reminder
     Paragraph Three: What did you do when you were in the shop? Describe it.
     Bonus Paragraphing: Think about how you could use a short paragraph for impact.       Remember: Full stops, capital letters, commas, speech marks, 
                                                                                           semi-colons, colons, etc. Do try and include semi-colons and 
                                                                                           colons.
     Extra Challenge Worksheet                                                            Ways you could start your sentences:
     Not sure how to start? Use this to help you:                                         -ly words: Amazingly, Surprisingly, Shockingly, etc.
     I would soon be inside. Amazingly, I could already smell the wonderful,              -ing words: Considering, Thinking, During, etc.
     delicious and powerful smells coming from the sweets. …
                                                                                          Connectives: Furthermore, On the other hand, Meanwhile, etc.
     Paragraphing Suggestion
                                                                                          WOW words you could use:
     Remember, you don’t have to organise you paragraphs like this, this is just to help you 
     if you are stuck.                                                                    delicious delightful wonderful amazing spectacular multi-
     Paragraph One: Explain what it was like waiting outside the shop.                    coloured sweet           mouth-watering sensational beautiful 
                                                                                          stunning shining enormous giant massive breath-taking
     Paragraph Two: Explain how you felt and what you saw, heard, smelt, tasted and felt
                                                                                          Punctuation Reminder
     Paragraph Three: What did you do when you were in the shop? Describe it.
     Bonus Paragraphing: Think about how you could use a short paragraph for impact.      Remember: Full stops, capital letters, commas, speech marks, 
                                                                                          semi-colons, colons, etc. Do try and include semi-colons and 
                                                                                          colons.
    Mega Challenge Worksheet                                                                                  Ways you could start your sentences:
    Not sure how to start? Use this to help you:                                                              -ly words: Amazingly, Surprisingly, Shockingly, 
    I would soon be inside. Amazingly, I could already smell the wonderful, delicious and                     etc.
    powerful smells coming from the sweets. …                                                                 -ing words: Considering, Thinking, During, etc.
                                                                                                              Connectives: Furthermore, On the other hand, 
      Paragraphing Suggestion                                                                                 Meanwhile, etc.
      Experiment with a variety of paragraph and sentence lengths to build up interest for your reader. 
                                                                                                              WOW words you could use:
                                                                                                              delicious delightful wonderful amazing 
      Sentences                                                                                               spectacular multi-coloured sweet         mouth-
      Experiment with a variety of sentence lengths and types to keep the reader interested in what you       watering sensational beautiful stunning 
      are describing. When will you use short sentences? Could you include embedded clauses?                  shining enormous giant massive breath-
                                                                                                              taking
    Mega Challenge Worksheet                                                                                  Ways you could start your sentences:
    Not sure how to start? Use this to help you:                                                              -ly words: Amazingly, Surprisingly, Shockingly, 
    I would soon be inside. Amazingly, I could already smell the wonderful, delicious and                     etc.
    powerful smells coming from the sweets. …                                                                 -ing words: Considering, Thinking, During, etc.
                                                                                                              Connectives: Furthermore, On the other hand, 
      Paragraphing Suggestion                                                                                 Meanwhile, etc.
      Experiment with a variety of paragraph and sentence lengths to build up interest for your reader. 
                                                                                                              WOW words you could use:
                                                                                                              delicious delightful wonderful amazing 
      Sentences                                                                                               spectacular multi-coloured sweet         mouth-
      Experiment with a variety of sentence lengths and types to keep the reader interested in what you       watering sensational beautiful stunning 
      are describing. When will you use short sentences? Could you include embedded clauses?                  shining enormous giant massive breath-
                                                                                                              taking